Example 1

REWRITE THIS SENTENCE

PROBLEM

No matter how much you dislike this sentence, you cannot change anything. The language and the capitalization are set in concrete.

DISCUSSION

The nice thing about legal disclaimers is you don’t have to worry about them. Let the lawyers do their thing. If you mess with their writing, you may end up in hot water.

REVISIONS

Before

Temporary Contractor acknowledges that he or she is an employee of Agency, and nothing in this Agreement shall be construed as creating an employer-employee relationship, a partnership, or a joint venture between Total Global Domination Software, Inc., and Temporary Contractor.

After

[No change]